GM Notes and Observations(warning, there is a bit of an ongoing discussion between me and Spirit in the notes):
Spirit:We'd prefer a definitive height ie 5'10"
Spirit:Semblance name could just be Propulsion instead of reverse propulsion
Phantom:Maybe even something like Rebound
Spirit:ooh that's a nice one. But yeah, something one worded for ease of rememberance
Phantom:IE, speed, polarity, shadow, glyphs. ability is good, though. just needs a better name.
Spirit:Versatility is great too
Spirit:Like the double meaning of her name - Crimson Copper and Darker Copper
Phantom:[s]the rare non-sexual double entendre, a dying art.[/s]
Spirit:It's brilliant to see though. Nice to see the pronunciation too.
Spirit:Fighting style isn't that efficient - more brutally effective with fast attacks. Still a fast fight, but less one hit ko and more as many attacks as possible
Phantom:low DAM high DPS
Spirit:yeah, I realised what I said and changed it
Phantom:I'm a bit wary of wolf themed characters, but pleasantly surprised by Tamn not being a walking stereotype. not relevant, just saying.
Spirit:I like her huggableness. It's more wolf pup than Alpha or Omega wolf
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Phantom:I should bring in Vasilisa...
Spirit:?
Phantom:My character from the wolf faunus OC contest, the ultimate alpha bitch.
Spirit:Oooh. Mine was an in-your-face alpha male. Mason. He'd be 3rd year student when these guys come in
Phantom:Vasilisa is minor enough to make a good villain for a C-team, but dangerous enough to be a reasonable threat to Vale.
Phantom:Mason could work as a background character.
Spirit:Zobel is his last name. Captain of MRNN (Maroon) (I keep thinkin Moron whenever I see the team name though lol)
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Spirit:Yeah, anyway, Tamn
Phantom:Right.
Phantom:Symbol doesn't really reflect her as a character.
Spirit:But it could be a family symbol - maybe if she put that?
Phantom:like a crest?
Spirit:Yeah, like the Schnee logo
Phantom:Alright, yeah, I can see that.
Spirit: What's the reverse magnetism part of her semblance? It's in her landing stratedgy
Phantom:Probably just a continuity error, happens all the time.
Spirit:Maybe she means the bounce effect, how she uses it to slow her fall...
Phantom:probably.
Spirit:Oath is cool, both Break and Keep. Though I think Breaker and Keeper are better names for the individual names than Break and Keep. Ties in with the overall name a bit better
Phantom:Yeah, sounds a bit more consisent.
Spirit:Can she use the chains when they're dual headed? I know she said it's unweildly with the longer handles, but
Phantom:Like an urgrosh?
Spirit:Uhh...google comes up with an axe
Phantom:probably thinking of a different DnD weapon, then
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