[quote=@Supercon22] That is a secret my friend. If I told you what was going to happen it wouldn't be a surprise. [/quote] So, what you're saying is "This is an RP, stuff is going to happen!" That doesn't garner interest. You don't have to give an entire book worth of plot, but just enough so we have an idea of where this might go. Are the characters just going to end up as alchemists apprentices, or something? Also, where and when is this set, just modern day, or something else?