[quote=@nod2121] [@HeroicGathering] I think its interesting that you're making a team but I'm gonna limit the team to three main members for now, unless you've got reason why you absolutely need all 5. Also, a couple things: I wasn't thinking of having a "standard issue" uniform for those aboard The Ark. I found it would be a bit more, normal, to have everyone wear whatever clothes they needed for their tasks. i.e. - if they were on the job they'd wear their work cloths, otherwise they'd wear casual stuff. In all your characters' short histories you speak of them as being awake for the 15 year journey. I enjoyed the creativity of them all but I'm gonna need to ask you to change a few aspects, namely that you speak of them being awake over the journey. We'll be beginning the thread one day before the actual launch of The Ark and once it's launched we'll all be put into Cryo-sleep, essentially freezing our characters in the state, age, and physiological mindset that they were in at the time. They'll be the same age and in the same state of mind once they come out of Cryo 15 years later. The only people that will be awake for the journey will be Captain John Royal (captain of the vessel) and a few unnamed staff to keep the ship running. Your characters' weapons and armor are a bit basic, don't forget we're 200 years in the future, I did state weapons tech hasn't advanced into the crazy ranges but there's still possibilities for some really cool stuff, and once we get to Andromeda, we might not have the most easy time dealing with things. So keep that in mind and feel free to revamp your armor and weapons ;) And finally, make sure you read all the thread rules. There may be something you forgot in your character apps ;)) [@Avanhelsing] I'm liking your character app but again, read the rules there may be something you've forgotten haha [@Avanhelsing] and [@HeroicGathering] I've put my character apps up in the character section. Feel free to read them, I'm getting a sense that we're thinking of different levels of technological advancement lol Also, [@PrettyWings] can't wait to read it :D [/quote] I must have misread or ignored the plot, how embarrassing. My bad. Well, that's a whole lot of work for nothing. I'll respectfully withdraw, and let you get some competent roleplayers in here. I think my eagerness to actually write something (having a hard time being in an RP that actually starts lol) that led to me to breeze over the intro post. All the best!