Basically make an ultra-simplified CS, and give it to me for review. If you want, you can fluff up even more, and I'll just tell you what's wrong and what's 'actually' a thing in-universe and such.

oh and eklispe, Pretty damn cool! it's Vitae though and not Viate, but otherwise pretty approved. As long as you note that a naginata can be pretty shit in CQC if you don't know what you're doing, and at first the PC's will likely have no idea what the fuck they're doing.

But yeah, pretty much approved, do the bio and I'll tell you what's gay and explain fluff as it's needed.

lazy, I know, but I have my excuses.