[quote=@Fat Boy Kyle]
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Simple, but good! Couple of very small things though:

I'd like to see a little bit more fleshing out in regards to equipment; so include what she's wearing and also give us some descriptions of her weapons (e.g. a plain, relatively new Iron sword). 

It's also a bit hard to understand why she was banished? She saved her Dad from bandits and the shop burned down? Are the two connected? Does he blame her? Why would he? 

You didn't mention what religion, if any, she was. It doesn't have to be an import factor for her, but it's better if we know. 
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Of course, I'll have it fixed soon!

I believe I filled in the rest as you suggested.