[quote=@MelonHead] Yeah, I do wish the Fury Vs Kanitah fight had a better motive than it does. I've been trying to stretch out the motivations as far as possible, because I don't like my characters to just be fighting for no reason unless they're true Chaotic Evil, but it wasn't happening. At least I always have the Evil Spirit card to fall back on. [/quote] Motivation is not a big deal really, I have seen worse reasons in other fights. This is after all the arena. The Dreamers taking offense at a backhanded comment by Scion to his watch comes to mind. However, in that case Skalla managed to create a rather odd reason for aggression into some kind of learning experience for Scion on a emotional level through skillful writing. I don't if many people could have pulled it off, but Skalla did brilliantly. Somehow... It's obvious Skalla loves the hell out of that character. (I think you tired to do something like that later on with Fury wanting the word Engine, it seemed to come out of the blue a bit from a readers point of view, since until then it was not apperent Fury knew about the word engine.) Of course that [i]"you have 8,035 days left in your life."[/i] part was baller as hell. Probably the one best line of dialogue I've read in the Arena for some time.