[@AbysmalDemon], your primary species are Humans, correct? You might want to illustrate that point more clearly. You all but imply it in the culture section, but never come right out and say it. As well, the amount of detail across the application is lacking to an extent where I'm having trouble perceiving the faction as a whole. I have no idea how large it is, what it's agenda is, how it's organized, etcetera. In general, the entire sheet is lacking a great deal of detail normally expected of advanced applications. I'll accept it as a work in progress, but until it's more fleshed out I cannot approve it.

Additionally, I'm not entirely sure I understand the progression of events described in your Governance section. The True Vacuum has only existed for four weeks, but you imply that an entirely new faction had time to be founded, splinter, reunited by a charismatic general, fall apart again once he died, and then be conquered. Which probably /could/ be squeezed into four weeks, I just wanted to make sure you knew.