Hmm. Well you see, my issue with it is pretty much limited to the abilities of the God Burst. It's essentially pulled directly from the parent/patron. Dionysus' makes sense to me, but the second one doesn't really make sense in relation to who it comes from. The second one seems to better fit someone like Ares, or Kratos. Also, for balancing's sake, I'm going to have to say that your God Bursts will have to be weaker than that of the others.