[quote=@RBYDark]
Well, it took five days but I did post as promised. I suppose let me know if there's any blatant anachronism or mistake I've made? Or just if something needs to be changed.
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I can't speak for IndianGiver, but to me it looks just fine. Now the rest just have to post, and we can get into some wacky, scary stuff, yay!