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[@ViridianHue]

You're here now, and with a wonderful character. You are accepted as well.


[@redbaron1234]

Overall a great looking character and an accepted ability. Can I just ask that you put a little more into describing Kyle's appearance? If what you had was paired with a picture I'd feel a little more comfortable but as of now, it's a little difficult to picture him. Just some little things like height or weight, hair and eye color, maybe ethnicity... A few extra things to make picturing him a little easier would be awesome.

Other than that he looks great. 
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Here is my revised CS. I reworded a few things and added to the description. Hopefully what I have added works.

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Name: Kyle Yu

Age:  26

Gender: Male

Appearance: Kyle is slightly taller than average at 5'11" and has a wiry physique. There is some faint scarring near major joints (knees, hips, shoulders, etc) left over from the treatment that gave him his power. His facial features testify to his Asian heritage, though his nose is slightly misshapen from an incident in high school. He usually has a pair of polarized sports goggles on his face or around his neck to help protect his eyes when running at speed. He keeps his black hair cropped short and his face clean shaven to avoid getting in the way.

Personality: Kyle is a very patient person. He likes to sit back, observe a situation, and come up with a mental plan before acting. He does find using his powers a rush, and takes great satisfaction in using them to successfully carry out a plan. Because of his powers, he often has to make efforts to not move too quickly for other people to keep up with him.

Motive: Kyle started out his law enforcement career as a Guardian because he grew up during the crime wave that struck the city in the late 2030's. He joined the police force as a detective to prevent that sort of thing from happening again. When he learned of the missing Guardians, he volunteered for the Guardian Angel project to prevent a second super-powered crime wave. 

Ability: Super Speed. Muscle twitch optimization means that Kyle can move much faster for the same amount of effort. For example, running at highway speeds is a light jog for him and he can perform reflex actions in a fraction of the time it would take a normal person to do so. 

Team: (I will give you this)

Extras: 
- Kyle often wears protective clothing similar to biker armor that complements his powers. It provides stab and bullet protection in addition to protection against impact and abrasion. This is necessary since tripping at speed can be very painful. 
- Fighting wise, he has continued to practice and hone the fighting skills he was taught in the police academy (unarmed, baton, and handgun) as well as taking up knife fighting.
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