[quote=@Lord Santa]
Here's my CS. Tell me if something's wrong with it.

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[b]Name:[/b] Steven Falcon

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[b]Personality:[/b] Somewhat lazy, Steven won’t do anything he’s not told too. Sometimes immovable, he rarely deviates or extends from a given task, unless something personally takes his interest. He’s quite whimsical, relaxed and somewhat unmotivated, largely content to live life with no real direction. However, his family pushed him to be a trainer and some of his friends are also trainers, so he’s becoming a trainer if only to make them leave him be. Despite that, he’s quite optimistic and figures that a few years away from home would do him some good, along with satisfying his parents.

[b]History:[/b] Steven and his family live in a relatively small town, with enough to get by. It wasn’t exactly amazing or anything, but there was some nature around so it made ideal space for the day care center. Steven’s father was a bird pokemon trainer (you know, one of those guys) while his mother was a pokemon breeder. They both had brief stints being trainers before settling down and raising a family of Steven and his little sister. While his sister was very curious and stuff, Steven really wasn’t. It was somewhat worrying for his parents how he’d be content to sit in the sun and stare into the sky for a while. 

When he grew up to be close to the age his parents started their trainer career, they started dropping subtle hints about it. They even sent him to trainer school for a little while, trusting him to his aunt living in the city where the trainer school is. Obviously, he eventually realised that they wanted him to have a trainer adventure, and while that wasn’t something he was exactly keen on, his friends (that’s you guys maybe) decided that they also wanted to be trainers, so through a mixture of peer pressure and expectations, Steven started to beign his trainer journey, probably.

[b]Wanted Starter:[/b] Spearow (nickname is Timothy)

Hold on, there’s more to this!
Timothy was an egg from Steven’s father’s pokemon, and has a pretty grouchy personality and shows his emotions quite easily. This can make it pretty difficult to get along with, but he’s developed a very close relationship with Steven. He’s kind of got a big brotherish personality to the people he gets along with, though he’s about on equal footing with Steven. Tim actually likes children and stuff younger than him, so he’s got a soft side.

Tim grew up with Steven in both of their early years, and they didn’t really get along very well. They argued a bit, and their parents often compared them too bickering brothers. Things did change eventually, though. Tim always had a habit of getting into things too big for him to deal with and Steven was constantly bailing him out. Eventually, Tim learned to trust and rely on Steven and Steven just figured that Tim wasn’t bothering him that much anymore so it was fine.

There was really no question on which pokemon Steven would take of the many his family had. He’d been with Tim for most of his life and trusted him more than almost anyone. Tim trusts Steven more than any other human or pokemon, and he trusts Steven’s judgement enough to stick around. They do call each other out on the other’s shortcomings, however, and Steven treats Tim like a sibling, not a pet.

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[hider=items]
- Food for humans
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[hider=Medicine]
- 2 potions
- 1 paralyz heal
- 1 Antidote
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[hider=Key items]
- Running shoes
- Region map
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[hider=Berries]
- 3 oran berries
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[hider=TMs and HMs]
- None
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I like it. There is one thing that you have to change, but that is my fault, I'll end up editing it in to the CS.

Please add this

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Name - Lv. - Gender - Moveset - Ability - Appearance [/hider]