[@Sunflower]

The reply for Emerson was fine, I was worried I didn't really give you much to work with. If that's the case let me know and I'm happy to adjust if need be. I know I tend to ramble and be overly descriptive sometimes, which I worry makes it hard to reply.
I don't have a problem with side characters as long as you don't. Actually that pirate that's chasing the Silver Arrow, I'd like him to play a part later on with something involving the twins. Whether it's kidnapping, or something else(sorry my brains a little fuzzy, I can't think of what else he could do atm). I'm kind of viewing Barley as Kristoph's main rival basically. So he's going to find out one way or another that the twins are in his possession. If you don't want to do something like that though that's cool. It was just something I was thinking about.
I'll get a reply up asap.