So the idea with the woman was that due to jealousy she sells out the girls, although she gets it wrong but puts the pirates on the right path in finding them. I think that later she would become an informant for Barley because Buror would kick her to the side after learning what she did.

I like the idea of them being put into a cavern. Maybe they get enough stuff to use to repair one of the old ships there or they get something to trade for a ship to use. 

I don't mind~ You should read some of my replies to older roleplays. They were text walls as well. X3 It is fine if Zeva's part is shorter. There's times where I can't post as much for one character so it's totally fine. The idea of Buror being a romantic interest is pretty good! It'll give us a chance to kind of show a bit more about the twins and where they grew up. As far as Buror's ships, there is one that is due to leave for Dorwine quite soon so this could give us enough of a reason for the twins to get onto a ship~