[quote=@thanatosDefiant] [hider=Rem][IMG]http://i.imgur.com/I13qSDJ.jpg[/IMG] Name: Rem Epithet: Mouth Blue/Sea: Born on Grandline, raised in East Blue. Crew/Base: The Gold Teeth Pirates: A pirate crew that values freedom above all else. Their main focus is to not only achieve the goal of the captain, but of each individual crew member that happens to board their ship. Bounty/Rank: - Age: 17 Height: 5'6" Weight: 156 Pounds Personality: Rem is generally a very carefree person, unlikely to be serious and demanding person one would expect from a pirate captain. He tends to act goofily and mess around, often being very blunt and disrespectful when doing so. When he speaks, he is often very loud. In fact, seeing him spend a day without yelling only occurs once in a blue moon, if even. Like many pirates, he is not only foul mouthed, but has lots of ambition as well. This stems mostly from his own avarice. He desires to enjoy anything the world can offer him, gain anything that he can attain, and explore parts of the world he's never seen. He is very loyal to his comrades, especially his crew mates. They are treated like family, even insulting them would be enough to make Rem lose his temper. Rem, since his early childhood, has always been interested in learning about the world. While not initially seeming like he would, he possesses an adequate knowledge of the world's history. As a child, he dreamed of traveling to these places. This is one of the things (among others) that inspired him to set out to sea. While he is very ignorant when it comes to other subjects, he has a vast knowledge of a number of islands. Rem is very fond of musical instruments and has learned to play a variety of them. He is very fascinated with bizarre or strange things, such as weird animals or people. He has a natural love for fighting and has great pride in his strength, often smiling when met with a powerful foe. The best word that can be used to describe Rem is "bizarre". Often times his behavior seems random or childlike, not often thinking things through or putting much thought into his actions before he does them. Rem's thought process behind most things is to do what's most fun at the moment. As a result, he can often be unpredictable enough to keep people wondering what's going on inside of his head. Despite this, he still has some level of self-control and typically refrains from doing things that could potentially harm innocent civilians. Devil Fruit (if any): N/A Skills & Talent: Monstrous physical strength, knowledge of many of the world's islands, can play a variety of instruments, and easily able to bring people together. Weapons: Wooden staff Transportation: 2 person boat. Dream/Goal: To become the pirate king and explore the entire world. Origins: Ever since his birth, it seemed inevitable that Rem would become a criminal. His parents were two notorious pirates, both rookies at the time. One of them was a man named Easton Seegar. He was a notably handsome and muscular young men, but also very cruel. Another trait of his that stuck out like a sore thumb was his oversexed personality. Wherever he went, he would always have a one night stand with a woman foolish enough not to know his true identity. As a result, many children have been left fatherless because of his tendency to never let relationships go beyond a one night stand. It is said that "Easton Seegar" is an alias and he keeps his true name hidden for reasons unknown. The mother, on the other hand, was a curious woman. Her name was Olivia Levasseur, a former high-ranking marine. She was known to be very capricious, but no one expected her to do something of this caliber. The only explanation she gave was that she couldn't being held back by laws for much longer. Not only was she actively a threat to the world government, but she had also managed to gather a crew of incredibly powerful fighters. One of these fighters was a man named Bruno, a hairy musician whose main purpose was to keep the crew at high spirits. He comes into the picture shortly after a short series of events. Anyhow, Olivia was also known to be a thrill-seeker, always having the need to experience new things. This manner of thinking is eventually what caused Rem's birth. Both of these infamous figures had met each other at Mock Town where they had both gotten incredibly drunk. Against their better judgement, both of them had decided to spend the night together. When morning came, it was clear that the Seegar was the only one of the two that didn't regret his actions. They both split up soon after, Olivia's crew never dared to bring up that moment again, but there was a reminder for the next nine months of travel. She was pregnant with Seegar's child. Even her own adventurous personality quickly grew frustrated by the torture she had to endure day after day. It was obvious to her crew from the very start that once she gave birth, the child would not be staying with them for very long. She gave birth while traveling through the sea. Without so much as giving the newborn a name, she immediately ordered for it to be killed. Bruno knew that this was coming, but he could not bear to let a child be killed. Even as a pirate, Bruno still had standards. He firmly believed that children were born without sin and could not bear to see one be harmed. Even when they raided villages or committed other crimes, Bruno refused to ever harm a child. This was when Olivia issued a challenge to test his resolve. He would spend fourteen days without eating food. During this time, the baby would be fed in his place. Without a moment's hesitation, Bruno accepted the challenge. For two harsh weeks, Bruno kept his word and ate nothing. All the while he played his violin for the crew as per usual. By the end of the challenge, Bruno felt significantly weaker than he did before. He collapsed right after the end of the last day. Olivia had pity on the man and allowed him to rest until he was fully recovered. Even after he left the crew, Olivia could not pretend as if the friendship she formed with Bruno had never existed. After a month of rest, they were sent off with a small ship and a month's worth of rations as parting gifts. The crew's ship was extraordinarily large and full of food; a month's worth of food was nothing to them. — They both arrived at the East Blue within a year. Bruno disguised himself to avoid being identified by anyone. Fortunately, because his most defining characteristic was his obscene amount of hair spread all over his body, Bruno was easily able to shave it and hide from the authorities. Bruno raised Rem in a small village in the East Blue, one that wasn't very heavily populated. Bruno homeschooled him and taught him basic math and literacy. However, he was never taught any of the more advanced topics, mostly because Bruno wasn't all too bright either. Not surprisingly, given his heritage, Rem was also a huge troublemaker. He had a nasty habit of stealing from other people and often picked fights with. Several other boys from the village would try to fight against him, but not one of them had ever defeated him. This is also when he started trying to execute some techniques that he thought would be cool to pull off. He never did have quite enough strength to successfully use them on actual people. He was around 10 years old during this time. Soon, he was challenged by a boy named Puer. The boy was a year older than him. But he was a bit too easy to make cry and constantly talked about his "manly pride". Predictably, Rem was easily able to take him out. But his other opponents, Puer would come back day after day to challenge him. While Puer never actually won, it was clear that he had been improving because of their fights. Over time, the two of them had developed an odd friendship. They would always fight each other and train to get stronger. They both dreamed of becoming the strongest warriors on the island and protect their "turf". Nobody really understood how these two were able to become friends. The closest explanation anyone got was from Puer; he said that their friendship was forged by the sheer power of their manliness! On one of the island's more relaxed days, something strange happened. People had actually come to visit! Everybody was intrigued by the group of new arrivals. They were a group of adventurers that simply traveled across the world with no real goal in mind. Their leader was an adventurous botanist named Carlos. The group stayed there for the rest of the day. Rem and Puer listened to the stories they had to share. Carlos and his men told of unbelievable sights and new discoveries all over the world! The band of travelers are what inspired both Rem and Puer to set off to sea in the future. Rem had even convinced them to lend him one of the history books from their ship's small library. After the travelers left, both Puer and Rem agreed that they would set sail when they thought they were powerful enough. They had also unintentionally inspired both of them to become pirates! As pirates, they would be able to explore just as Carlos and his men did. The major difference being that they wouldn't be restricted by the law of the government. While they had achieved remarkable feats, explorers were ultimately bound by the same laws of everyone else. Pirates had the most freedom on the sea, it was only natural that the two boys would choose to become one of them. Rem soon realized something. If a pirate had such freedom, how much would their king have? He was 12 years old at the time, he had gained two ambitions: become the pirate king; explore the entire world. This news was met with much protest from Bruno, who had hoped that Rem would stray away from the path of a pirate. Rem payed no attention the old man's words, he had already made his decision and was very adamant. At age 16, Puer had set out ahead of Rem to become a pirate. Once Rem had become the same age, he set out to sea. He has been sailing for approximately one year and plans on starting his own pirate crew![/hider] [/quote] Sorry for keeping you waiting. ACCEPTED!! [quote=@Sabotage] [center][hider=Suzaku D. Fist] [img]http://vignette4.wikia.nocookie.net/fairytail/images/3/36/Kage.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20110727071756[/img] [img]http://media.animevice.com/uploads/3/34471/615988-kageyama__profile_portrait__large.png[/img] Typically seen wearing a white jacket with green trim (left unzipped and open), a light gray sash down around his waist that's long enough to hang to his knee's, accommodated with a pair of cargo shorts and sandals his father used to own. [/hider][/center] [b]Name[/b]: Suzaku D. Fist. [b]Epithet[/b]: "The Phantom Cook", "The God of Cookery". [b]Blue/Sea[/b]: South Blue. [b]Crew/Base[/b]: Captain/Cook/Navigator of the Powder Keg Pirates. [b]Bounty/Rank[/b]: [img]http://i.stack.imgur.com/0mvFA.gif[/img] 50,000,000. [b]Age[/b]: Nineteen. [b]Height[/b]: 6'3" (192cm). [b]Weight[/b]: 166 lb (75kg). [b]Personality[/b]: Suzaku shows a generally laid back and easygoing attitude towards almost everything. Doing this for so long has caused him to look at the severity of any situation fearlessly. He is very eager for adventure, and sometimes will get distracted easily over some of the most common of things (if he thinks hard enough about them). Overall, Suzaku is a friendly, somewhat independent person, but tends to lead people the other way, and despite a dark turn of his past events, he maintains a pretty happy attitude. [b]Devil Fruit[/b]: Kaze Kaze no Mi (Wind Wind Fruit). A Logia-type Devils Fruit that allows the user to manipulate, create, and transform into wind or air at will. Used to increase speed and move as if weightless, and create a gale or spontaneous gust of wind. [b]Skills & Talent[/b]: Black Leg Style, Rokushiki, Cookery, and Navigation. [b]Weapons[/b]: Long chain made of sea stone with a safe steel handle encased in rubber. [b]Transportation[/b]: A small Marine vessel re-purposed and painted over with all Marine insignia removed and replaced with pirate flags and a jolly roger. [b]Dream/Goal[/b]: To gather enough money (or find a cure) for an operation to save his fathers life. [b]Origins[/b]: As an early child, Suzaku grew up with a moderate wealthy family as an only child in a small village amongst the South Blue. His father had been a pirate for most of his life, until he reached an old age where he grew out of that scene, and his mother had been a world-reowned cook. Suzaku was somewhat popular and had a few friends, but liked to spend time with his family. While he enjoyed this, he also felt something was missing too, a certain absence of excitement from his life. One day, it was brought up that Suzaku's father had a terminal illness, one that would surely kill him within a few years if the proper treatment was not done. This operation costed a fortune, more than any of the world's greatest pirates even dared to imagine. This is where Suzaku started taking up bounty work, and collecting small time criminals and pirates for ends meat and eventually an operation that would save his father’s life. It was here the World Government started taking notice of the growing skill that Suzaku was displaying. This was just what he was looking for. Suzaku had signed a contract with the World Government that lasted five years in which the deal was as promised: High value pirates would be taken out by Suzaku without any hesitation at just the point of the World Governments finger. Desperate and scrambling to look for opportunities, this would do more than just fulfill his short term dreams. Over this time period, Suzaku trained in various combat arts, and took on new skills. One in which involved eating the Kaze Kaze no Mi, which Suzaku has still not fully obtained true power with it yet. As criminal activity dropped, Marine power rose, and the village Suzaku was used to seeing as a warm and happy spot, was now corrupted by Government agency and abusive force was starting to be used. Suzaku and his favorite Cyborg friend Matteo decided to draw the line. This was no longer a free world anymore, so they both decided to form a revolution in order to sustain some balance within South Blue. The revolts recruiting was carried in silence, but released all at once against the Government and Marine units against surrounding areas within the South Blue. The contract Suzaku once had with the World Government was destroyed, and both of Suzaku's parents went into hiding for the time being. After the battle had seized, a new order was put into place, and Suzaku hit the high seas not just for the thrill of adventure, but in attempts to earn enough beli to save his father's life, or perhaps even find a cure. [/quote] Rokushiki, seastone, and your an OP loggia. Sorry but your character needs a tone done buddy severely. Rokushiki MIGHT be available what technique were thinking to begin with? Your entire fruit has to go though. Besides that, I don't find a problem. Make those changes and notify me please.