[quote=@Blitz]
Maybe you were rushing, maybe not,
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Well, considering what I said previously... 

[quote=@Psyga315]
Well, time to do what I am notorious for:

Rushing the ending. :lol
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No worries.

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I was originally gonna have Zack swallow his pride and give up on fighting people, with Sam, his brother, giving him batteries for him to eat, allowing him to regain a fraction of his power without overloading him or having enough juice to be effective, though only temporary. Essentially fulfilling the conditions of him obtaining his goal through different thinking.

I found a couple of problems with the ending though. For one, it made Sam seem like a drug dealer, because the previous chapter and this one made it seem like he was addicted to the power and that Sam was egging the addiction on instead of not allowing [i]any[/i] information regarding regaining powers to enter Zack's ears like he had vowed before. Also, eating batteries seemed like a very, [i]very[/i] cheap way for him to regain powers, even if it [i]is[/i] out of the box for him.
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