Kudos for completing the interview this time around, Andy. That being said, it needs some work before I can accept it. Andy's personality seems to be one giant middle finger, and his only hobby is parkour. It also strikes me as odd that he's a professional parkourist at the age of 17, but I'll give you a prodigy pass there. However, balancing having a social life with school, being a professional athlete, [i]and[/i] a cat burglar is too much to suspend disbelief. Anyway, more than half of his sheet is taken by one-liners, so I can't really critique anything there but length. Once he's more fleshed out and real, I can accept him, but until then, homeboy needs a lot of work.