[quote=@Dynamo Frokane] Hey guys, these posts are pretty short, like ive mentioned before we are in advanced and even though its low advanced I expect to see larger paragraphs. Please use more enviromental descriptions and thoughts in your characters head if you don't have as much to say as usual, or sadly sometimes its best to wait until there is more going on, interaction wise before posting. [@MyCatGinger] Will you be able to keep an eye on this if I'm not around? I think I've even been guilty of it once, we all need a reminder here and there. [/quote] Sorry. I've been having trouble with all of my writing lately. School is starting up soon, and I have a fully booked week. Also I've always been taught that three to five sentences equal one paragraph. I [i]do [/i]try to count them, y'know. Monday-Watch after the puppy while uncle goes to his doctor appointment Tuesday-Puppy training class Wednesday-Watch the puppy while aunt and uncle go out Thursday-Dance class, therapy, shopping