[quote=@iciclerapierfaize] Still adding pictures but here's some of my character sheet. [Snip!] [/quote] Accepted, though you seem to be missing the strengths and weaknesses for Destiny's Song. I suppose you don't want any of either that's fine, it just confused me that they weren't present. Go ahead and add it to the characters section if that's the case! [quote=@Argetlam350] [hider= Aura] [u][b]The Character [/b][/u] [i]What is bravery, without a dash of recklessness?[/i] [b]Name:[/b] Aura [b]Age:[/b] 24 (looking at one of the older student positions) [b]Gender:[/b] Female [b]Species:[/b] Human [b]Appearance:[/b] (At least a paragraph, photo or not. A picture is nice, but you're going to need a bit more to make them come alive) [img]http://vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/lastremnant/images/5/50/Emma_cg_illust.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20100123020432[/img] She stands at 5' 7'' and weighs around 180 pounds. Her attire is what you see in the picture above. A scar runs across the center of her noise just under her eyes, though it is hard to see unless looking for it. Her eyes are the color of the ocean with a slight spark of mischief to them but don't make her made or those sparks with start a fire in her eyes and you best stay clear of her then. To top it all off her blonde hair goes down slightly behind her back to which she keeps in a pony tail as in the picture as well. [b]Personality:[/b] Aura has a positive attitude on almost everything and has a rather energetic personality that isn't easily subdued. Perhaps due to her energy she has such a low attention span as well, but when given a task of great importance she is able to focus on it and complete it, usually if she manages to keep her patience. She is a rather sociable person as well, unafraid to start a conversation with people she just meets, meaning making friends for her comes naturally. Her devotion to family and friends is strong and if it came down to it, she would risk her life to save theirs. She finds that actions speaks louder then words, which gets him into trouble from time to time as well as means he would rather shoot first and ask questions later when it comes to fights. [b]Capabilities:[/b] She specializes in defensive combat, keeping her guard up and striking when the enemy leaves an opening. Since she has a defensive combat, dodging is another specialty she has learned well to get out of the way of attacks that she knows she can block or fast opponents that break her guard to easily. She knows some magic at least to do moderate damage with fire and electric spells while the other spells are weaker. [b]Weaknesses:[/b] Fast barrage attacks can break her guard depending on how fast and how many attacks are in the barrage. A faster opponent can be trouble for her normal combat, meaning she has to dodge, while she has trained herself to be good at dodging this does leave her open, if not for normal attacks then magical ones to which her defense is useless against most of the time. Magic also can break her guard rather easily. She might be able to block one magic attack but no more. [b]History:[/b] Where Aura comes from is a world in the Plain of Bravery. Where she grew up was a place that was rather hard to reach but was a sight to behold, but now all that remains of that place are embers and the dark things that lurk inside the once majestic walls of a thriving town and village. She and few others managed to escape the calamity that happened in the old city she once called home. She vowed to one day return and reclaim it for those who once lived there and smite the wretched beasts that now have taken it as their home. In the meantime, she grew up under a protective mother and a father who was a knight or defender of the next city they came to call home. It was one faithful day while outside the town in the forest where she was surrounded by heartless did the blade she wields not appeared. She was sent to the Plane of Sanctuary to be taught how to wield it with the greatest of potential and has lived at the academy for seven years and itches to help save other worlds and fight the beasts that took her original home away but has to stay patience which isn't entirely easy for her. [b][u]The Blade [/u][/b] [img]http://i1136.photobucket.com/albums/n491/Argetlam350/VereorNoxKeyblade_zps0xsmualg.jpg[/img] [b]Name:[/b] Vereor Nox [b]Description: [/b] [i] There is no path. Beyond the scope of light, beyond the reach of Dark... ...what could possibly await us? And yet, we seek it, insatiably... Such is our fate. [/i] A blade that has the form of an old sword, the end coming out like a battleaxe, despite it's ancient appearance, the blade is deceptively strong, able to withstand some of the strongest of blows an opponent attacks with and deals out a moderate attack power that used correctly, can be devastating for opponents who don't have some good guarding capabilities. It's the same length as the sword shown in Aura's appearance image. [b]Strength:[/b] A blade that has excellent guard with a moderate attack power. [b]Weakness:[/b] It's great guard and moderate attack power is gained at the sacrifice of a slow swing. [b]Other:[/b] N/A [/hider] [/quote] So, about Aura. She's a great basis for a character, but I think you may have misunderstood the history of Sanctuary a bit. The fall of the six other Planes of Light happened over 100 years ago, and thus she could not be around for when it happened. You could still keep this history in essence, perhaps she could be driven by the stories passed down through their family of the fall of their home. Which brings me to my second point; Besides Sanctuary, which is meant to be an original world akin to Traverse town or Twilight town, all the other planes are meant to be based on some existing fictional universe. If you want Aura's family to come from Bravery, I'd like you to try to come up with some ideas for what Bravery will be based on. She has a medieval theme, so perhaps something like fire emblem, or final fantasy? Or perhaps something more traditionally middle ages, like Game of Thrones or Lord of the Rings. You don't have to come up with a plane, but I would like some help ^^; I didn't want to rail-road the universes people could draw from, but the lore I wrote up dictates that about 6/7ths of the population came from those other planes.