[quote=@Kingleo] Accepted, though you seem to be missing the strengths and weaknesses for Destiny's Song. I suppose you don't want any of either that's fine, it just confused me that they weren't present. Go ahead and add it to the characters section if that's the case! So, about Aura. She's a great basis for a character, but I think you may have misunderstood the history of Sanctuary a bit. The fall of the six other Planes of Light happened over 100 years ago, and thus she could not be around for when it happened. You could still keep this history in essence, perhaps she could be driven by the stories passed down through their family of the fall of their home. Which brings me to my second point; Besides Sanctuary, which is meant to be an original world akin to Traverse town or Twilight town, all the other planes are meant to be based on some existing fictional universe. If you want Aura's family to come from Bravery, I'd like you to try to come up with some ideas for what Bravery will be based on. She has a medieval theme, so perhaps something like fire emblem, or final fantasy? Or perhaps something more traditionally middle ages, like Game of Thrones or Lord of the Rings. You don't have to come up with a plane, but I would like some help ^^; I didn't want to rail-road the universes people could draw from, but the lore I wrote up dictates that about 6/7ths of the population came from those other planes. [/quote] I mean hey I can do more with Bravery I just wasn't sure how much I had to work with so I kept it vague just as a precaution. If you want more I can give more if need be. As for Destiny's Song I must of missed that part so I'll go back and look again. I'll rework it.