[@Habibi359] - I really like this character. Well done! There are a few things I would change - some of the wording (starting in the Personality section) is a little rough, like you started writing one sentence, decided to crop most of it out, but left a few dangling words. Don't worry, I've done the same thing more than a few times. :3 

In the last paragraph, "...The reasons why Robert exactly chose to join the PHI are somewhat vague..." is a little too vague, since the wording sets up an omniscient uncertainty. There's more narrative interest (and even room to play with for character growth) in something like "...Robert keeps his reasons for staying with PHI to himself...." 

Once we get a more full cast, I'll be certainly asking everyone to make sure they know what their characters think of the others as well, so give some thought to that, too. :3

Just polish those couple things a little, and I'd say you're in!


[@vietmyke] - I quite like that picture! :3 Just the right kind of atmosphere.