[@KaiserAuto] So he's a character that doesn't interact with others and doesn't observe what's happening around him? If so, then his personality has to be changed to someone who at least pays attention to his surroundings and thinks. If he's not going to interact with his surroundings in either active or even passive role, then he might as well not exist at all in terms of story. Story interaction is to me one of the basic principles to writing characters, and if the character lacks that it's not a character, but a tool. [@ArkmageddonCat] I'd say two to three paragraphs, though I prefer detail in posts more than length. If you can keep up with the others you're pretty much fine.