[quote=@The Grey Warden]
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1. That's why I am delaying the invasion. What I mean by several weeks could be several months or years. I am not rushing to invade the country so early. The next posts will give detail about the planning of the invasion and the operation's history.

2. Then, I must of forgot about it or mistaken for another battle. I am referring to the battle, where the Pan-African navy was mostly destroyed. If it's old news, then I just edit it in and remove some words. 

3. Mozambique and Tanganyika are allied to Pan-African Empire (according to the lore summary on the first page). Unless I am wrong, then I will look like a dumbass. I also know that Ethiopia will declare war on France, to protect their ally and all of that. 
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1: What I mean is this; that you need to make sense of the thing. PoW has wars, and in the past we have had nonsensical wars, but at this point we want everything to make sense to at least some degree. That post made it seem like France's invasion is just this flippant thing. Like, your leaders are deciding to get involved in a war with a neighboring super-power over... what? You need to be more subtle, work up through the politics and intrigue, that sort of thing. Because otherwise, if you start right out of the gate with a war coming from nowhere, that conflict will seem silly and convoluted. 

2: The Battle of the Mandeb. That was at where the Red Sea meets the Indian Ocean. 

3: Ah. I was confused at your intentions because you forces were in Madagascar.