Gave it another going over and made some minor structural changes. I'll give it another look over tomorrow when I have some distance.

[@The Nexerus] Luckily my ability to churn out Breton mages is unparalleled! Well that and I already had a basic story line that I didn't get to use in another RP ready to go.

On a related note, I'm thinking of digging a little deeper into the cultist component, how comfortable are you with trauma in play? I can see someone coming out of a situation like that being a little messed up around the edges.