[quote=@Lmpkio]
[@Wade Wilson]'Moments later, a beam of plasma energy hit Nemesis in her chest, followed up by a spinning kick as Monster X descended to Earth. He jumped off her, landing a few paces away.'

It appears you kinda broke Rule 3) No Autohitting. You attacked Nemesis in a way that she can't exactly have a say in. Perhaps if you did something like [i]'A beam of plasma energy aims at Nemesis' chest as it fires upon her.'[/i] and '[i]Soon after, Monster X descends as he runs towards the opposing kaiju and attempts a spinning kick upon her'.[/i] that will be better. 
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Oh, yeah. I was trying not to do that XD. I'm used to writing stories on Wattpad, you see. I'll edit it.