[@IncredibleBee]
Dear Bee;

After looking over your CS with Gowi and examining it with the utmost care and attention to detail we have come to a conclusion. Your character in its current form just isn't going to work for the tone and themes of the story that is going to be told here. If you would like a more in depth analysis feel free to PM me and I'll try my best to help you iron out the details. 

Sincerely, Hex