[@theoncomingstorm]
Yeah you can just edit it to say N/A for now. And now it is time for some comments, while I have a second to spare.

First and foremost the character template for this RP is designed in the way it is to avoid clutter and keep things nice and simple. My first issue is you did not follow this character template which speaks to problems that may or may not come up in the future based on following rules and such I don't know yet. I understand you were adapting another sheet which also has some problems I prefer all the characters in the RP to be fresh, but that does not excuse you from the template.

The other big problem right in the front is his armor. The Jango Fett style of armor was not really seen in Mandalorian Culture until about a millennial after the Mandolorian wars. Their armor instead looked like this.[url] http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/File:MandalorianArmorKotORCG.jpg[/url] For those of you unfamiliar shock trooper armor is the one all the way on the left. The Jango Fett style that inspired the clones evolved from the shock trooper armor over hundreds of years later. So he really wouldn't have that type of armor yet for it would be a blatant disregard for history. 

Appearance just listing all the parts of the appearance in a list doesn't work I'm sorry, it is supposed to be in a well written paragraph for a reason, so I can see how you write. Another reason why you are supposed to follow the template.

Also he can't be a merc either, Mandalorians didn't hire mercs during the wars because it was their war hiring mercs would be going against their entire culture. If you were fighting with the Mandalorians you were a Mandalorian and nothing else. It was your job, your life and your duty it was there [b]everything.[/b]

1.5 Million Credits is another big issue here. The Mandalorians during this time as I should say the Neo-Crusader didn't have salaries or anything like that everything was basically provided for them because they were a military and funded and fueled like one. They didn't have to worry about buying things because they took what they needed.

Attributes and abilities are all wrong as well. Did you even look at the character template or my CS? It is there to follow that as an example so you do it right. You list an ability and its explanation of why they have the ability and how it useful and then go down a list in order of potency. You don't fill out bars upon which don't really tell us much about the skills or even how skillful they are based on them. 

You have problems in your Equipment as well most of the weapons you listed at least the primary ones did not yet exist. Most being from the rise of the empire era, meaning most were seen in the clone wars first. I provided in the useful links a list of all the weapons that existed back then so that they would be correct and we do not have this problem. Also with your armor firstly you don't have to least all the pieces and secondly as already stated Mando armor was standardized for the most part so unless there is something special about it like how [@seriousarmour] is experimental suit (which can be done since they are elites and get some of the new toys from the warforge) made of more lightweight material so putting protection aside for mobility [b]yet[/b] keeping the same standard appearance (which is very important part of the Neo-Crusader way, the appearance helps unify them) there is no need to list it.  

Next... transportation... I'm just going to ignore that in its entirety because A it is not part of [b]template [/b]and B no it is just stupid they can't have their own ships.   

All the miscellaneous stuff can go under Equipment once again to keep clutter down. Also data phones don't exist anyway they have comm links built into their suits so that makes those two items redundant to even list. No need to list a jetpack because they all have jetpacks like it was listed in the CS tab if you read it.

Biography... Really that is all you are going to say? Do you see how short that is and how I would have a problem with it? Do you see how it doesn't give the character any substance and doesn't go into detail and not really relent to this story or the Mandalorian Wars or how he joined the squad or anything that I asked for in the CS. Honestly its kind of crap.

Finally personality, sure that is fine that is the only thing that is okay.
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I'm sorry to say this but your sheet as I've kind of pointed out it is filled with holes and problems. This is an Advanced Role play and my standards are not low. What you gave me belongs more in casual or free. Maybe if you read the rules and didn't automatically post in the character tab, or showed any kind of effort at all to work it to the template provide I would go easier on you and try and help. But you didn't, so in its current form all I'm going say is either rewrite it and impress me or go it is that simple. You are more than welcome to rewrite and try again but in its current form I cannot accept it.