[quote=@OtomostheCrazy] Well, I did write these in one go, so some things might be off, but these are made by how Hikaru views the other. Still, what do you think is wrong with them? [/quote] [quote=@PyroFox] "Okihika Hanzō: "Oh crap...This guy is the Headmaster?! After I showed up late, he seemed a bit...disgruntled? Annoyed? Ah man, I made a horrible first impression on him! The guy seems like a strict and hard teacher, too! Aw man, I gotta be careful in this class!" I think there might be something a tad bit off here. [/quote] ^ that :D