[@Augmented], I said it'll be explained in the IC. Also, your character must have a career as an assassin behind him. You made it look like his job with Cheshire is his first real job.

[@Starlance], looks good. When you referred to yourself as 'newbie', did you mean a newbie in this forum or an RP newbie in general? Cause based on this sheet, you don't really look like one.

E: And by the way, do not post the sheet in the 'Characters' section yet. I want to see how many sheets I can get before going on with my verdict. Although unlikely, I may get CS' from parties who didn't show immediate interest.