[quote=@Henwen] Mwahahahaa! [/quote] It was worth the wait tbh. [quote=@Henwen] We Deff need the lil gang/druglord of SpacePort 241. They can bardge in and threaten the doc and the cargo. Noah and Viva will have to work together to keep things from devolving into another firefight which would be really hard to do cause she is TOTALLY for having somebody just take this all off their hands if nobody gets hurt. And maybe Valko can unexpectedly save the day while being still totally blitzed out of his mind! LOL And Noah still gets his manipulative twist to things. [/quote] This is like!!! I can picture one villain having an eye-patch, can he have an eye patch? Also, hero Valko, baked off his tits on morphine. I like this also!. [quote=@Henwen] But we ALSO need whoever it is that Noah pissed off to the point that they'd not be shy about saying Hey There is a fortune of Nth being transported in a ship of this class wouldn't it be a shame if somebody took it. I'm thinking that the job Noah got them wasn't actually theirs. Like this is a third party drug lord that's stepped in on some other Druglords toes and has had them SNIPE this cargo from somebody else. Seems like something he'd be up for that would get them in a whole mess of trouble. So thats at least two new characters ish i think. Maybe three if we want to include whomever our Contract is with, the dude we are dropping all this hell-drug off at Paradiso. Oooh maybe we can have some kind of standoff big fight there where the people chasing them, our crew, and the drop off folks all meet up on Paradiso? [/quote] Yeah, totally, eyepatch guy, dude needs an eyepatch!!! He can have some lackeys on the space port but we can run into Patches himself on Paradiso at the drop off! [quote=@Henwen] And we still need to have the Inspection, and the PhoneHome, Loire and Noah get discovered Banging, And Viva plans a mutinany/escape. MWAHAHAHAA this thing just gets better and better the more we write it! [/quote] Yes. Much excitement on the way because theres never a dull day on the Lucidae. [quote=@Henwen] Loire and Noah get discovered Banging [/quote] Maybe by Valko but not Viva ;P Noah will tell her when he thinks it will hurt her most and keep her in her place, whether she believes him or not is another thing, but of course if she asks the doctor afterwards, he'll have no choice but to confirm that Noah's actually telling the truth for once!!!