I made an Inquisitor (Investigator). Does it fit with the world?

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Name: Alice
Age:17
Height/Weight: 1.62 Meters/55 Kgs
Appearance: Alice is a short and slim young woman, whose striking features are her hollow blue eyes and long, braided blonde hair. Underneath her cover of normalcy is a history of abuse told in scars, most of which cover her back. She wears clothes to fit into her surroundings like a chameleon.
Birthplace: Custos
Profession: Inquisitor (for certain occasions).
Skills/Talents: "Lucky Boy" - Alice knows how to read a customer and know what he wants. The ability came in handy when she was used in the church's investigations of ill-repute.
"The Biggest" - Alice knows what to say, and make anything into the truth. Otherwise why would you hire a girl if she spends the time complaining?
"On the Back" - Alice can endure punishment, both physically and mentally, for long periods. It had left a scar on her flesh and mind, but her experience taught her to come on top.
"Dead Inside" - Alice learned how to turn herself off when it was most painful. She could do that same while inflicting pain on others, pushing her to do the most inhumane things to get what she's after. No remorse in the path of vengeance.
"Active Imagination" - Alice knew that there were only two ways of escaping her world, and she always chose the hard one. She's a smart girl with a helpful imagination, which lets her solve mysteries like nobody else.
"Double Loyalty" - Alice sleeps with a sheathed knife under her pillow, trusts no-one, and awaits the day she will kill her old madame and every priest alive. That had to wait, since she first had to help the church solve a certain pesky uprising...
Association: The Church of the Innumerable Ones
{A quick bio - Alice was sold into the profession as a child, grew up into the trade, learned to hate men and especially the priests, became a personal favorite of an inquisitor, disposed of him - and instead of execution, she became the church's bitch on a tight leash).
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