[@Ancient Amen] your almost complete, just your history still talks about the personalities changed his phyiscal capabilities still which i told you it couldn't do. He could have the phyiscal capabilities to do some of that already it's just his personalities are the only ones who will actual act on it like he doesn't believe he can do it himself. the main thing about that though.. i'd get rid of the running twice the speed of an average man. that's bit to much i think. sure can run faster than an average person but not twice+. i like characters being a bit physically fit but they shouldn't be extremely physically fit at the start of the rp. [@WilsonTurner] hm.. not to sure how to phrase what my mind is telling me. I guess one, just because the color in regards to actual color code, falls between red and blue, doesn't necessarily mean it has the aspects of both. I did say people could say what a color would mean. though they wont just be different levels of the 3 that i originally told. and i did say first come first serve in regards to that, which technically Gingerboi made a purple, though he hasn't fixed everything in his yet so his is not complete so not accepted, so it's still up for grabs. Though amen is close and he also has purple, though has a better concept of making it, its own thing. which if his is done then he'll be the first come first served. Yours the talent and primary source of magic is what troubles me. especially when you go saying 'requires more strength to use' and everything.. sure talent in Manipulating energy, i can understand that. all that would mean is he'll LEARN FASTER in regards to that in the lessons, it doesn't mean anything else. While primary source of magic acts like he can simply just give and take magic from animals and plants like it's nothing which again not something he should be able to do, especially at beginning. To take magic from anything outside one's body and to give magic to the same thing is Fairly advance magic manipulation which no one will learn for a good while in the rp.