[@Rex]
hm.. there be bound to be people like that sense not everyone can use magic, makes sense some. and seeks to give a scientific reason as to why some people can and why some can't or what ever, trying to find a scientific way about magic, even if there may not be any.

Even though most people die not because their unsuitable but because of themselves. of course most don't understand what it takes and so they just want to become powerful and it destroys them. even if they survive the ritual, they can still die during training.

it kind of fits and everything. alright currently I don't see anything completely wrong about it, so the character is accepted. that'll make 3 characters who have made it so far. including one who was only discussed in PM currently.