No it was fine very elaborant. I like communication between characters, Cayne played off of what Max said about the strange transmission which was well done. All of you are creating good detailed posts and this is how great stories are told. Allow me to add, dont be afraid to add your own story elements you believe should happen in the roleplay. Playing off of each other is key. Akame and Stellans relationship excites me and I cant wait to see where Cadence and Mirrahs story arc will go. The relationship between Yamesh and the humans.