[@Izaka Sazaka] So, reading through Mao, he looks really good. Jutsu and everything are balanced, love the Giant Spider, and his personality gives me a kind of Shikamaru meets Kakashi vibe. Which is good. My only thing is the history, its small and doesn't really tell much about the actual character. As someone who struggles with history, I can understand its tough to come up with one, but a little more would be appreciated. 

I would accept it after those edits. :)