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[@Prince of Seraphs] You seem to have really interesting opinions on everyone's entries (I enjoy reading your pseudo-reviews). What's your opinion on Estelle?
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Since we haven't seen all that much of Estelle it's sort of difficult to give an accurate account. Because of the nature of this RP the CSs don't have a bio section attached which makes it little difficult to compare the two characters so I don't know how much of Dark Estelle's history actually pertains to Estelle.

That said I did quite enjoy the character of Dark Estelle herself. The weaponry and semblance understandably remain unchanged, while personally I would have made changes or augmentations to the semblance as her personality looks radically different the ability still suits her. What I really liked was the history she had. In this RP we see a really lot of faunus cast in a certain light. Abused workers, rejected minority, second class citizens and in the RP as well as the contest stories we see a lot of faunus victimized and brutalized or righteously fighting back against oppressors. Dark Estelle's history shows the flip side of the coin with faunus not being the good guys (or at least being justified in there wrong acts). her history shows an old faunus family something that hasn't been mentioned before (usually they're made to look like scavengers) and a mildly psychotic one at that which actually values the development of certain faunus traits that have up until now been treated with scorn.

If you want some advice though I'd do some restructuring on the History Section's second paragraph. The first one is good at outlining Estelle's life and values while the third one does a decent job of showing how her life was altered by the death of her sister and the murder of her mother. The second paragraph however sort of leaves the reading in the dust. It sort of hits you in the face with the fact that Estelle's mother killed Bianca and leaves you a little confused as to what happened. I had to reread the first three sentences a couple of times to figure out exactly what happened.

That's just me though.