[quote=@WilsonTurner]
[@Aristo]
I did a [s]thingy[/s] character!
Go look!
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I just added to the political section with overviews of the governments that appear on the map; with them done, maybe you could flesh out a bit of a history? It doesn't have to be terribly long, but just serves to inform me of your character's experiences prior to joining the Panthers and how they got there. Another paragraph or so to Disposition or so wouldn't hurt either. Don't forget the inventory and funds sections; I may have added them after you got your WIP up. Inventory just catalogs all the personal equipment your character carries (sidearm, uniform, helmet, personal belongings, etc. etc.)


I should also mention that Cradle Dynamics is based in the Sodroyan League, although has little affiliation with the government. SL is where we'll be starting off.