[quote=@carla6677]
Okay so the leaving to India. It is a plot twist and I have a plan. This is to put a slight bit more about my character and her family who live all around the word but it will also have a problem and then mystery until something good happens.
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I don't understand, has Bluebell left the room to go to travel to her family to India ? Or is she still in the room? I was confused when you said she left in past tense made me wonder whether if she actually left or if that was an explanation.