[quote=@RainDash]
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Okay. Give me a bit, I'm also gming something else so I have to go through a bunch of sheets and critiquing them as well. At a glance your sheet seems to be a lot better. One comment is about the mind control, that's edging into godmod territory since you could control probably the other characters.
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I'm not going to say much about mind control because if you read my whole sheet, Genso's right eye's ability is actually not meant for mind control. His left eye was supposed to be, but because he was a failed experiment, he never could perfect mind control. Furthermore, even if Genso was somehow to perfect his "defective" left eye, I won't allow him to use total mind control on other players without the other party agreeing on the action.

For now Genso can barely use his eye power. All he can do at most is alter the memory of a person like he did with the principle. It won't be until way down the line that he can control minds - that is if it even happens.

Oh and take your time~