.....my last edit, I'm saying this in the nicest way possible but this is getting to be more work than its worth. I mean the first few edits were obvious and needed to happen due to the lack of forethought, but now it feels a bit like your grinding down on my CS and taking away from how I want them to be. Nero is a weird name but that's his name, and why can't Aletha wield a sword? That's one of the many things that make my characters unique. My edit is that I replaced excellent with natural for her sword skill to make here "less skilled" and did say in the bio that she liked kendo. Hopefully this is enough for my CS to be accepted.