[@Skepic] He's good. Just add his Allegiance which should be placed under Age. The CS model has been updated for that. I'll let the short background slide since it's optional to put character history. [quote=@Savo] Now that I think about it, what if the person changes over time through character development. Would the tome change alongside the person, or stay the same? Also, Windel, would it be possible for a tome to become part of a persons shadow? [/quote] What [@KoL] said. [@McFazzer] She's fine. Just add her Allegiance.