[quote=@Mr Allen J] [@Xeronoia] Only two things that I have to note is that you don't have to put relations with your [i]family[/i] in your dynamics section. Only relations with other characters. The other thing is purely superficial, but you didn't really note when her power developed in her backstory. [/quote] Aaah, ok. I suppose for now it'd stay empty then? Also, will think about it and edit in something about when her powers developed.