[quote=@The_written_John]
As such, in order to pay for his home, since jobs were hard to come by, Gibson was [b]one of the original creators of the Boomtown Rats,[/b] along with a few others, and, against his better nature, for the good of his loving mother and father, [b]did many questionable acts, and resorted to vigilantism to pay for his families home.[/b]
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Cooouple things, here. The Boomtown Rats are a new group, they've only formed in the last month or so, so [i]every[/i] member is technically one of the "original members." Secondly, vigilantism doesn't pay, they're high schoolers - which also means they're not criminals. Criminal antagonists, maybe.
Also, can't help but notice a pretty glaring lack in... well, character flaws in general.