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[@Sifter]

Hmmm...seems alright, although you are taking a few more liberties with the lore than i would like.



Honorable discharges are a thing, although they only happen to REALLY good personnel that have proven themselves loyal enough not to defect, and even then, they are expected to aid in another new order section. Just getting that across.

Directorate of public safety sounds EXACTLY like something ive already established. i was gonna put a faction bio up for them on my next post. (Ill PM the details to you if you want) This is a mistake on my part however. My bad.


If he was privy to sensitive information, there is no way in hell they would just let him leave and go indepedent. Sorry. He could have been MOVED to the military as a consultant however. 


Not sure if i want a conspiracy that goes all the way up to the high council. PM me it if you can please. Something that involves a single member might be alright though. (like bribery or something) But of course, it might be fine as it is, i just need to see it first.


And what do you mean by the "Reign of the new order"? In the weapons section. The new order is reigning right now. It sounds like you are referring to the old world civilizations. Otherwise, its fine.



So yeah. Im happy to fill in any information you need.
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1. Kasperov left the Military in order to join the DPS, but now that I've read what I had written again, I see that this was not made clear. Sorry.

2. If It's based on the CIA/KGB, then sign me in.

3. I have to keep this, sorry. Notice how I began calling him Kasper only after he goes independent, that is the point when he cuts his ties to the New Order. This is the point where he becomes a new man. This is the point when his strings are cut.

He is [b]contracted[/b] by the military.

He goes back to the MPS after a [b]request[/b]. Not an [b]order[/b].

He leads his [b]own[/b] unit.

Even his code name - Kozak is a spelling of Cossack. Cossacks are a group of predominantly East Slavic people who originally were members of democratic, semi-military communities in Ukraine and Southern Russia.

I believe you misunderstood how it happened too. I am making a much more detailed biography and I am planning to release it as flashbacks in my IC posts, ofcourse if you will accept my character.

4. I will explain it to you in PM.

5. A honest mistake I made. I am very sorry. :)