[@Tracyarmav]
Do not use the phrase "dahlin" or any sort of hint at condescension when speaking to someone, as clearly you don't belong in the conversation in the first place. It makes you sound crude and your opinions are clearly invalidated by using that sort of low-brow "joke." I had an issue with the characterization of some people (and couple others did too), and offered my criticism. If you want to learn to be a better writer, you have to learn how to take advice instead of just brushing people off. There are lines that shouldn't be crossed, and we've already seen a few  based on our posts and OOC comments, including yours. I was attempting to offer honest feedback, and expect a certain type of realism when dealing with people who call themselves "advanced roleplayers."