[@Snarfulblast] uhh, alright just a few things about you sheet that I'd like to address in order to accept it. -Kind of missing the color aspect of his image/appearance. I don't know what twilight purple is but I expected to see some of it. (If you can't find a suitable image, please describe his outfit in the appearance section.) Aside from that, is there any particular reason he is 100 lbs heavier and doesn't look like it? I mean... just, why? XD -In regards to his weapon, I feel like you could do some more with it, you know? Be creative? But... I suppose if you want it to just be an axe, that's fine. Just remember that you won't be able to do much else than hack and slash seeing as you didn't put any details of what it could do. I'm going to have to call you out IC if suddenly it becomes a cannon. -I need a bit more of an in depth personality. -The history is also pretty lacking. How did the events in his life shape him into the person he is? How does he view the world now? Why does he fight Grimm? etc. -Need to explain his combat style a little more, and as well as what his weaknesses are. -Lastly, his semblance doesn't seem to make sense to me. How can he really gauge when his teammates are hurt? How does he/what causes him get stronger? Does this only work when teammates are nearby or can he tell if his teammate got hurt from some distance away? If he takes more damage, how does this even help the situation at all? Where does being enraged mix in with all of this? Unfortunately with all these questions, I can't accept your character until more detail is put into the sheet. If you have any questions or feel my critique was unfair, please let me know.