I'm very very interested..don't tell me there's no more room. [@The Grey Dust]
I never correct other people's post in IC or OC but yours was just written so good that the little mistakes stood out as an eyesore. And my english vocabulary is still forming so I just wanted to ask something.
+ At the "5-th layer of hell paragraph" 5-th line from the top "middle the layer"
+ At the "5-th layer of hell paragraph" 5-th line from the bottom "for the fighters in the never die"
+ And what does "tainted metal waters end" mean?