Wow. Just.... Wow. Come the fuck on people, this is why the NRP section is a cesspit. Get off your bias, your grudges and whatever preconceived notions of "the best RP" it is you have, and try not to shit up yet another NRP. Mindlessly bickering over who has what grudge, or trying to foist some inane idea unto the GM and make yourself the victim only drags everyone else down. [img]http://31.media.tumblr.com/3d97e17cf5f93f665d16d4eec8eb3ada/tumblr_na1qkiDZnu1r0b2hgo1_400.gif[/img] [@PolishKing] I read over your app from top to bottom, and I'll say exactly what it is that bothers Duck, and it's something I noticed yet passed over. The military section reads a bit strong, with a pretty tight focus on showing how advanced the nation is militarily. Most of it I just apathied past, as it doesn't really pose a concern to me, and I know that sheer technological power doesn't equate to military victory in any sense. My only real concern is that you seem to have set yourself up as completely self-reliant when it comes to the fantasy-resource. I too have a technocracy type of nation, but leave them to be more reliant on the outside world for their resources. What's the fun in having wonderous technologies and such if you have absolutely no need to trade for the resources that power them and build relations with foreign countries? Furthermore, I think it sets a dangerous precedent for one person to say how they have "large reserves" of "x", as in the past I have seen multiple apps following such NS' which state mostly the same. Regardless of how amazing this resource is, it is finite(At least I think it is...) and so we can't all have large mines of it. In truth, I would prefer that no player nation have a large source of the resource, and instead leave it to NPC nations so as to see about fostering a greater narrative. Beyond that, I don't see this RP as a game to be won, and I sincerely hope that no one else is here under that assumption. If you are, get out and go one section lower or two sections higher. Arena or Table-top games will be more suitable to you, and probably more welcoming to the attitude of who has the bigger e-penis.