[@Animal]

I would say it looks good but cut back on all the skills and bring it down to at least 4, and you'll have to wait for [@TheWindel] to give approval and look over your Cs, also have his gun fire rubber bullets since the school frowns upon and doesn't allow lethal weapons or the use of lethal attacks. 

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