[quote=@Ellri]
If you really feel it needs a rewrite, then copy it out to a doc and get a mod to hide the post.

Then divide it up there, so you avoid long prison collab.

Or move it out of the prison so others aren't prevented from interfering even as they are present.

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Well the reason I wasn't speaking about hiding the post as I know [@FallenReaper] had planned on having a dream sequence anyway.

Also how are we supposed to move it out of the prison? We're prisoners remember. We don't get hall passes.