[@Kidd]

[quote=@Kidd]
[@BreakingMe] You might want to explain how she's been hiding the fact that she's a vampire for about a year. Where is she getting the blood? Is she drinking from the vein? Also, you can delete anything I gave you in parenthesis such as "(any notable weaknesses, fun facts, and anything else you want us to know about your character)" so it looks cleaner. 

Fix that up and you should be good.
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Done - I added that she moved across the state for college so she doesn't see her family and she feeds off of pricks from the bar :)